Writting 2


WRITTING 2

I learned how to make a story from start choosing the topic, brainstorming, organizing, and revising. The story that I made this is my imagination from some drawings that I made a story.

Choosing the topic;
1.They plan something.
2.They discuss problem solving.
3.They are relaxing and chatting.

Brainstorming;
-They plan something to build a headquarter.
-The headquarter use for hide foods from enemies and as food reserves when the situation is difficult.
-They plan when will begin to build the headquarter.
-They plan what is needed to creat a base.
-They are eager to work together to build the headquarter.

Organizing;
Headquarter
The mouse gang planed something to build headquarter,they have long plan to make headquarter. The headquarter in intended to hide from enemies and food supplies diving difficult situations. They discussed the issue of building a rat base and taking about planning when to build the base and taking about what was needed to build the headquarter.

Revising/Final writing;
The headquarter of rat gang
One day there was a rodent association called rat Unyu Gang. They were rats who often hide food from places where there was plenty of food,because they has a lot of food,so they thought they should have a headquarter can keeping food for a difficult situation. They talked about building headquarter with details, from what materials were needed and when to started the construction.Discussion was over, the mice look eager to build a common headquarter. The construction of the mouse headquarter started and went smoothly. Two months they built a large rat headquarter. They had finished storing the food in headquarter. They kept watch everyday too keep the headquarter from enemies who could steal food from time to time feel.